Friday, 24 April 2015

Homework 24 April Friday/ Class Writing

1. Do your individual writing on 'The Greedy Boy'. Remember to write in paragraph.

Here is our class writing that we did today. Different groups took different pictures
to write on and finally we combined all our hard work to produce
a story on 'The Greedy Boy'.


       The Greedy Boy 

             It was a fine morning. Tom was eating tidbits in his bedroom.He loved to eat tidbits.

             The next morning, Tom went to the hawker centre and bought more tidbits. He ate greedily and felt very happy.

             At night, Tom cried in pain because he had a toothache.Immediately, he called for his mother. His mother felt worried and rushed him to the dentist. The dentist advised him to brush his teeth and eat healthy food.

            From that day on, Tom promised that he should be less greedy.He learnt that he should brush his teeth after eating his food.

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